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Couldn’t Hear

By Lapfordlass 42 views
By Lapfordlass 42 views

Poetry. Life threatening injury. The other waiting for a miracle. Sweet Revenge related.

He couldn’t hear the words
Only the soft urgency of the voice that he somehow knew was talking to him, cajoling him, praying for him, needing him.

He couldn’t hear the words
But he could hear the love, the loyalty, the hope that was asking for a miracle, for a response, for a sign.

He couldn’t hear the words
But he could feel the strength being offered and the need unspoken.

He opened his eyes
And saw the words running down in tears of joy on the face of the friend and brother he knew and loved so well.

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Hi. I am a UK born writer, living in the lovely county of Devon. I grew up watching and reading Star Trek, Starsky and Hutch and Sherlock Holmes. Other favourites from teens and twenties were Simon and Simon, Hill Street Blues, pretty much anything with detectives or police officers involved and strong male leads! More recently, I fell in love with Quantum Leap, Lois and Clark, ST:TNG, X-Files, Stargate SG1, A Town Called in Eureka etc. Currently watching Blue Bloods and The Rookie and the Magnum reboot. Absolutely adored Elementary and am sad it's finished! I wrote fan fiction for myself as a teen (mainly Star Trek related) and had a couple of short stories published in fanzines. Then had a gap of many years before starting to toy with a few ideas for SG1. Life has been busy and I haven't written for a few years. In 2019, I started writing a few short stories (missing scenes from films etc.) just to flex my writing muscles. I rediscovered Starsky and Hutch on the Sony Channel recently and fell in love with the guys all over again. I started wanting to read fanfiction again and discovered this website and others and suddenly had the writing bug again. Reviews are always welcome, especially comments on character, dialogue, plotting, settings etc. At the end of 2020, I also self-published two books - one 'Lost and Found' has its origins in S&H, the other 'Putting the Pieces Back Together' is about my experience of bereavement. Both can be found on Amazon. Hope you enjoy what I write! Lapfordlass

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