I Saw You

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Originally published in the Boys In Blue Zine in 2008, edited by Enednoviel.


I saw you,

I saw you,

All thumbs and blushes.

Like Atlas with the world on his shoulders.

I thought, “He’ll never be a cop.”

I thought, “He won’t make it through.”

You stammered all your answers.

You muttered every word.

A few weeks went by.

Some time went on.

You got your sea legs.

You smiled sometimes.

You started shining, like a brand-new penny.

You started talking and never shut up.

We met at a party, once you pulled your head out of the books. 

We met at a party, once you let down your guard.

It took you long enough to decide how to introduce yourself. 

You paused, as though you might give me a fake name.

Then you smiled, real big, and said, “Ken Hutchinson.” 

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